
Composition Accident – Planning (P3 & P4)
Question:
Write a story based on accident
Pictures Given:
An old woman lying on the road/a speeding car/a child on the mobile phone
Planning
Introduction
- Sun streamed down mercilessly
- Trudging home from school, with heavy school bag
- Along the way I greeted my elderly neighbor Mrs Tan
- (Character Development)– Mrs Tan was neighbor who lived alone. She had no family. Always kind to me. Gave me cookies when she baked them
- Suddenly I heard the screech of a car and a loud thud
Problem
- Spun around
- Mrs Tan was lying in the middle of the road, motionless
- Red sports car sped off without stopping
- At first I stood stock still, my heart beating wildly.
- I felt terrified
- I had never seen an accident before
Solution
- I sprang into action
- I took down the license plate number
- I took out my mobile phone and called the ambulance and my mother at home
- Crowd surrounded Mrs Tan by now
- Ran to her and held her hand
- A deep gash on her head and there was a pool of blood
- She was crying
- Within minutes the ambulance and police arrived
- Paramedics put her on a stretcher and took her to the hospital
- I gave the police my statement
- My mother and I accompanied her in the ambulance
Ending
- The doctor said Mrs Tan suffered head injuries
- She stayed in hospital for a month
- When she returned home, my mother and I took care of Mrs Tan
- She thanked me for being a good neighbour
Primary 3 English tuition class schedule
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Sunday | 12.00 pm | 2.00 pm |