Composition Accident – Planning (P3 & P4)

Composition Accident – Planning (P3 & P4)

Question:
Write a story based on accident

Pictures Given:
An old woman lying on the road/a speeding car/a child on the mobile phone

Planning

Introduction

• Sun streamed down mercilessly
• Trudging home from school, with heavy school bag
• Along the way I greeted my elderly neighbor Mrs Tan
• (Character Development)– Mrs Tan was neighbor who lived alone. She had no family. Always kind to me. Gave me cookies when she baked them
• Suddenly I heard the screech of a car and a loud thud

Problem

• Spun around
• Mrs Tan was lying in the middle of the road, motionless
• Red sports car sped off without stopping
• At first I stood stock still, my heart beating wildly.
• I felt terrified
• I had never seen an accident before

Solution

• I sprang into action
• I took down the license plate number
• I took out my mobile phone and called the ambulance and my mother at home
• Crowd surrounded Mrs Tan by now
• Ran to her and held her hand
• A deep gash on her head and there was a pool of blood
• She was crying
• Within minutes the ambulance and police arrived
• Paramedics put her on a stretcher and took her to the hospital
• I gave the police my statement
• My mother and I accompanied her in the ambulance

Ending

• The doctor said Mrs Tan suffered head injuries
• She stayed in hospital for a month
• When she returned home, my mother and I took care of Mrs Tan
• She thanked me for being a good neighbour